Monday, June 6, 2016

Hi,

I'm Kristi Sayles.

I wear lots of hats! Let me tell you about myself...


I'm a professional marketer
I'm super excited about my new health and wellness
 business! Check it out at :
 Check out my new Facebook page:
  http://Facebook.com/LoseWeightandWrinkles

Do you have a small child or baby? You will LOVE my site at
http://YourChildandYou.com 

I'm an author. You can see my list of published books here: Kristi Sayles Published Books on Amazon


I'm a Christian songwriter and singer.
The song above is called "God's Got This." I wrote it at the
Cancer Treatment Center of America in Georgia. That's how I feel about life.
God's got mine. I've been through some tough times, but God has always pulled me through.
(If you like the song, go to Amazon here to check it out here: Kristi Sayles' Published Books and Songs


"God's Got This" draws the listener in with brilliant lyrics and an emotional performance.

Thank you for submitting your song, "God's Got This" for critique.
I must start off by saying that the lyrics are brilliant! It can be difficult to tell a story like this without it sounding contrived but you did a magnificent job conveying a sincere and heartfelt message. Nice work!!!

Production wise, it comes across as a little sparse and I feel it could be much more full and dynamic. That chorus is so great and it would help the song tremendously if it had a big instrumental build by the time it got to the last time around. I hear that you made an effort to do that but something just seems missing instrumentally to my ears.
Additionally, I would add more harmony parts throughout instead of waiting until late in the song.
I do, however, think the tag at the end with the youth chorus was a really good idea.
Again, I appreciate the opportunity to provide feedback on your work. Best wishes for great success in your musical endeavors.

Luanne Hunt, CEO Star Creek Entertainment


Well...
Nothing's perfect, but she loved the lyrics! 
Now, if I could just get someone to help me
with the music! 

Praise God! 

Jamsphere Review of Kristi Sayles

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I'm also a teacher at Camden Elementary School. I teach writing and computer skills.

If you want to know even MORE about me, look to the right upper corner. I have listed my Internet Marketing Experience. Want to know more? Just ask! :)


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